More copy-editing suggestions for MCE wiki

[MURATA Makoto]

Caroline,

Thanks.  I have incorporated your changes.
How about "detecting" rather than "checking" or
"signalling"?

I have added several examples.  Descriptions of them
have  not been reviewed.  I did not change the rest
except I changed the text between the first itemized
list and Example 1.

Regards,
Makoto

2012/11/17 Arms, Caroline <caar at loc.gov>:
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Makoto