Two editorial problems in Annex H of Part 2

[Rex Jaeschke]

See my comments below, in-line.

As we plan to revise Part 2 after we've done Part 3, my thinking is to deal
with minor issues in Part 2 as they occur and then gather them and their
resolutions into 1 or 2 "cleanup" DRs, so there is an audit trail of their
consideration.

Rex


-----Original Message-----
From: Arms, Caroline [mailto:caar at loc.gov] 
Sent: Monday, December 17, 2012 6:32 PM
To: Rex Jaeschke; SC 34 WG4
Subject: Two editorial problems in Annex H of Part 2

Rex,

I have been going through Part 2 and noticed two small glitches:

Part 2 Annex H  

row M6.14 page 118

The consumer shall consider a
SignatureProperty element that
does not contain a SignatureTime
element or whose Target attribute
value is not empty or does not
contain a **fragment reference the
Id attribute of the ancestor
Signature element** to be in error.

segment between ** doesn't make grammatical sense.

<Rex>
I agree Caroline. Looking at the earlier sentences from that rule and
borrowing the same format used in "... contain a fragment reference to the
value of the Id attribute of the root Signature element", I propose "...
does not contain a fragment reference **to the value of ** the Id attribute
of the ancestor Signature element ...".




row M6.23 page 120

"data/time"  should be "date/time"

<Rex>
I agree Caroline.



   Have a happy Christmas.

Caroline Arms
Library of Congress Contractor
Co-compiler of Sustainability of Digital Formats resource
http://www.digitalpreservation.gov/formats/

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