PLEASE PROOF: Final Drafts of 29500-1:2015 and 29500-4:2015 Posted to the SC 34/WG4 Site for Proofing. Feedback due by 2015-07-10

[MURATA Makoto]

#216

A sentence should be added to the first para.

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#222

The default value is not "nlCheck" but "off"

#222 is my last so far.

Regards,
Makoto

2015-07-11 8:21 GMT+09:00 John Haug <johnhaug at exchange.microsoft.com>:

>  Rex, if you don’t mind ignoring your request for comments by tomorrow, I
> can look at some of these next week.
>
>
>
> Which items did you review, Murata-san?  You said you started with #146
> (18.17.7.242, I believe) and the highest number you commented on is #198.
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> John
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>
> *From:* Rex Jaeschke [mailto:rex at RexJaeschke.com]
> *Sent:* Thursday, July 9, 2015 12:33 PM
> *To:* 'SC 34 WG4'
> *Subject:* RE: PLEASE PROOF: Final Drafts of 29500-1:2015 and
> 29500-4:2015 Posted to the SC 34/WG4 Site for Proofing. Feedback due by
> 2015-07-10
>
>
>
> See my responses in-line. I disagree with one and don’t understand one
> other.
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> Rex
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> *From:* eb2mmrt at gmail.com [mailto:eb2mmrt at gmail.com <eb2mmrt at gmail.com>] *On
> Behalf Of *MURATA Makoto
> *Sent:* Friday, July 3, 2015 9:27 AM
> *To:* SC 34 WG4
> *Subject:* Re: PLEASE PROOF: Final Drafts of 29500-1:2015 and
> 29500-4:2015 Posted to the SC 34/WG4 Site for Proofing. Feedback due by
> 2015-07-10
>
>
>
> #198
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>
> This change was correctly incorporated, but the indentation in the
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> consolidated Part 1 is too much.
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> Rex> Agreed; will fix.
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> Regards,
>
> Makoto
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>
>
>
>
> 2015-07-03 17:25 GMT+09:00 MURATA Makoto <eb2m-mrt at asahi-net.or.jp>:
>
>  Rex,
>
>
>
> I began with #146 of Part1.  I will send more.
>
>
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> #152
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>
> The second bullet in #152 in the COR to Part 1 lacks a verb "is".
>
> Although this does not exist in the COR, I think that this
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> editorial error can be fixed.
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>
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> Rex> Agreed; will fix.
>
>
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> #155
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> The COR is correct, but the consolidated text does not
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> incorporate this change.
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> Rex> Disagree; I see the fix applied in both the DOCX and PDF versions.
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>
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> #169
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>
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> This change was correctly incorporated, but the layout
>
> is broken. See 18.17.7.342 in Part 1.
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>
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> Rex> Agreed; the trailing newline should be restored. Will fix.
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>
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> #174-176
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>
> "unit face value" should be replaced by "units face value".
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> Rex> Agreed; will fix.
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>
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> #177
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>
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> This change was correctly incorporated, but the layout
>
> is broken. See 18.17.7.356 in Part 1.
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>
>
> Rex> Agreed; the trailing newline should be restored. Will fix.
>
>
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> #187
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> Is *notes*Master actually a notes master?  This is for
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> both the DCOR text and the consolidated text.
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>
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> Rex> I don’t understand your question. Are your suggesting the DR
> resolution in this regard is incorrect?
>
>
>
> Regards,
> Makoto
>
>
>
>
>
> 2015-06-04 0:58 GMT+09:00 Rex Jaeschke <rex at rexjaeschke.com>:
>
>  Some months ago, balloting ended on CORs for Parts 1 and 4 of 29500.
> Both ballots passed.
>
>
>
> I have applied the edits in each COR to the corresponding standard from
> 2012 to create a 2015 edition. As this new edition contains no new material
> beyond what was adopted in the ballots, no further balloting is necessary;
> this is an editorial task.
>
>
>
> However, before I submit the final versions to ISO for publication, I’m
> giving WG4 (and Ecma TC45) members a chance to review the final drafts to
> make sure I applied all the edits correctly. In the case of Part 1, there
> are some 250 sets of edits. I don’t expect members to check all of them,
> but if each member randomly chose 10 of them and checked those, we’ll
> likely get good coverage.
>
>
>
> The changes are tracked, and both DOCX and PDF versions are included for
> each Part. Don’t be concerned if you see some bright blue edits, as they
> will be “fixed” when I finally adopt the tracked changes.
>
>
>
> Part 4 contains some manual pointers into Part 1, but these have not yet
> been updated. I will do that once Part 1’s tracked changes have been
> adopted, and that Part is frozen.
>
>
>
> I have posted to Livelink the 49-MB and 13-MB zip files as documents
> 2015-0309 and 2015-0310, respectively. Only registered members can access
> these.
>
>
>
> Rex Jaeschke, 29500 Project Editor
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> --
>
>
> Praying for the victims of the Japan Tohoku earthquake
>
> Makoto
>
>
>
>
>
> --
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>
> Praying for the victims of the Japan Tohoku earthquake
>
> Makoto
>



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Praying for the victims of the Japan Tohoku earthquake

Makoto
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