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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Murata-san<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Maybe I have overlooked something, but does there need to be some explanation as to why there is a non-normative reference to 29500-3 in the Bibliography? 30114-2 uses the “foreign OPC part” extension method, but as far as I’m aware this is fully specified in 29500-2 and is not mentioned at all in the current edition of 29500-3, so I’m not sure that a reference to 29500-3 is helpful, especially as there is no mention of MCE in the text of this draft. The Foreword refers anyone reading this text to 30114-1, which contains a reference to 29500-3, which may well be sufficient.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Francis<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif'> eb2mmrt@gmail.com [mailto:eb2mmrt@gmail.com] <b>On Behalf Of </b>MURATA Makoto<br><b>Sent:</b> 03 July 2016 07:40<br><b>To:</b> SC34 <e-SC34-WG4@ecma-international.org><br><b>Subject:</b> Proposed draft for the DIS 30114-2<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Dear colleagues,<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Attached please find my proposed draft for the<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>DIS 30114-2.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>I find a conflict between the diagram for the relationships<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>used in this standard and the rest of this standard. The<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>diagram has a relationship from Character Checking Condition<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>parts to to-be-validated parts. But it is defined nowhere<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>in the rest.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>To address this conflict, I introduced a relationship type<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>in Annex B, and changed the markup for specifying the id of<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>the relationship. I tracked the changes required for<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>addressing the conflict.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>This draft is based on a new templates from JTC1. It is<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>linked at the bottom of this page:<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><a href="http://www.iso.org/iso/home/standards_development/resources-for-technical-work.htm">http://www.iso.org/iso/home/standards_development/resources-for-technical-work.htm</a><o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Using this template, I incorporated all changes agreed in<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Prague.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Makoto<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></div></div></body></html>