<div dir="ltr">Francis and Caroline,<div><br></div><div>Thank you for pointing out that MCE is not used anywhere in this </div><div>document.</div><div><br></div><div>Perhaps, we should reference Part 1 (PDTR) and further state </div><div>that we use foreign parts but do not use MCE? Probably at </div><div>end of the Introduction? Here is my </div><div>first cut.</div><div><br></div><blockquote style="margin:0 0 0 40px;border:none;padding:0px"><div><div>As stated in TR 30114-1, there are two main ways to add extra markup</div></div><div><div>or other data to OOXML documents. The first way is using the</div></div><div><div>extension mechanisms described in 29500-3, “Markup Compatibility and</div></div><div><div>Extensibility (MCE)”. The second way is embedding foreign OPC parts.</div></div><div><div>This document uses the second way but does not use the first way.</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>I have accepted all other comments from Caroline.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div>Makoto</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-07-07 11:51 GMT+09:00 caroline arms <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:caroline.arms@gmail.com" target="_blank">caroline.arms@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Murata-san,<br>
<br>
Here are a few things I noticed.<br>
<br>
* Inconsistent use of non-breaking spaces and hyphens in numbers for<br>
ISO standards. I see the non-breaking variants used in Normative<br>
References, but not elsewhere. I noticed this because the built-in<br>
viewer in Firefox 47.0.1 for .doc files does not recognize the<br>
non-breaking hyphen character, closing 29500-1 into 295001. This will<br>
be something to check for any conversion to PDF.<br>
<br>
* 3.1 looks to have a meaningless note, perhaps left over from the<br>
template. It reads, "Note 1 to entry: Text of the note."<br>
<br>
* It isn't clear to me what the curved arrow at the top of Figure 4.1<br>
is supposed to mean.<br>
<br>
* 4.3.3 has a page-break in the middle of the URI for a namespace.<br>
<br>
* B.1 "This annex provides media types and relationship types used<br>
in this document." This statement seems odd, because they are not used<br>
in this document. Perhaps "This annex provides media types and<br>
relationship types to be used for the OPC parts specified in this<br>
document."<br>
<br>
* I agree with Francis that the Bibliography entry for 29500-3 is<br>
either unnecessary or needs some explanation.<br>
<br>
Hope this helps.<br>
<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
Caroline<br>
</font></span><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5"><br>
On Sun, Jul 3, 2016 at 2:40 AM, MURATA Makoto <<a href="mailto:eb2m-mrt@asahi-net.or.jp">eb2m-mrt@asahi-net.or.jp</a>> wrote:<br>
> Dear colleagues,<br>
><br>
> Attached please find my proposed draft for the<br>
> DIS 30114-2.<br>
><br>
> I find a conflict between the diagram for the relationships<br>
> used in this standard and the rest of this standard. The<br>
> diagram has a relationship from Character Checking Condition<br>
> parts to to-be-validated parts. But it is defined nowhere<br>
> in the rest.<br>
><br>
> To address this conflict, I introduced a relationship type<br>
> in Annex B, and changed the markup for specifying the id of<br>
> the relationship. I tracked the changes required for<br>
> addressing the conflict.<br>
><br>
> This draft is based on a new templates from JTC1. It is<br>
> linked at the bottom of this page:<br>
><br>
> <a href="http://www.iso.org/iso/home/standards_development/resources-for-technical-work.htm" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">http://www.iso.org/iso/home/standards_development/resources-for-technical-work.htm</a><br>
><br>
> Using this template, I incorporated all changes agreed in<br>
> Prague.<br>
><br>
> Regards,<br>
> Makoto<br>
><br>
</div></div></blockquote></div><br><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><br>Praying for the victims of the Japan Tohoku earthquake<br><br>Makoto</div>
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