<div dir="ltr"><div>Murata-san,<br><br></div>I see you have been breaking the examples into bullet points.  One awkwardness that I had noticed is still present --  in the first bullet of the first relationship.<br><font size="2"><br>


















</font><p class="gmail-MsoListBullet" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.5in;line-height:115%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><font size="2"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span style="font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;line-height:normal;font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size-adjust:none;font-kerning:auto;font-feature-settings:normal">      
</span></span></span>The mode of the first relationship is Internal
(default).<span>  </span>Thus, the base IRI <span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)">("pack://http%3c,,<a href="http://www.example.com">www.example.com</a>,ex.opc/foo/test.xml")
</span>is the pack IRI created from the IRI (<a href="http://www.example.com/ex.opc">http://www.example.com/ex.opc</a>) of the
package and the part name "/foo/test.xml".</font></p><p class="gmail-MsoListBullet" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.0866in;line-height:115%;font-size:11pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;text-align:left"><font size="2">I would move the parenthesized base IRI to the end of the sentence as<span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></span></span></font></p><p class="gmail-MsoListBullet" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.0866in;line-height:115%;font-size:11pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;text-align:left"><font size="2"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">, yielding "pack://http%3c,,<a href="http://www.example.com">www.example.com</a>,ex.opc/foo/test.xml".</span></span></span></font></p><p class="gmail-MsoListBullet" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.0866in;line-height:115%;font-size:11pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;text-align:left"><font size="2"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">    Caroline<br></span></span></span></font></p><p class="gmail-MsoListBullet" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.0866in;line-height:115%;font-size:11pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;text-align:left"><font size="2"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></span></span></font></p><p class="gmail-MsoListBullet" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.0866in;line-height:115%;font-size:11pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;text-align:left"><font size="2"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br><span style=""><span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"></span></span></span><span style=""></span></span><span style="background-color:rgb(255,0,0)"><span style=""></span></span></span></font></p></div>