<div dir="ltr">I checked the prose and schemas.  (The automatically <div>generated schema documentation help very much!)</div><div><br></div><div>I completely agree on the changes proposed by Francis.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div>Makoto</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2018-03-09 4:42 GMT+09:00 Francis Cave <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:francis@franciscave.com" target="_blank">francis@franciscave.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
  

    
  
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    <p>I do not think that the term "math argument" needs to be defined,
      but I think it would be helpful to identify the elements that
      represent mathematical expressions in this category, and which can
      have <m:argPr> as a child element. I therefore propose the
      following change to the first paragraph of §22.1.2.5, as the
      simplest way of doing this:</p>
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      <p>This element specifies any properties of <font color="#ff0000"><strike>the</strike></font><u><font color="#3366ff">a</font></u> math argument. <u><font color="#3366ff">The following elements represent math
            arguments: deg (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.26</span>),
            den (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.28</span>),
            e (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.32</span>),
            fName (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.37</span>),
            lim (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.52</span>),
            num (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.75</span>),
            sub (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.112</span>),
            sup (<span style="font-family:-webkit-standard;font-size:medium;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;display:inline!important;float:none">§22.1.2.114</span>).</font></u>
        [<i>Example</i>: The XML below represents the argSz attribute on
        the base element e of a box:</p>
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    <p>Incidentally, I have spotted more inconsistent drafting in
      §22.1.2: "Border-Box object" vs "Border Box object" (§22.1.2.11
      and §22.1.2.12); "Box object" vs "box object" (§22.1.2.13 and
      §22.1.2.15). These are minor nits.<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
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    <p>Francis<br>
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</blockquote></div><br><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><br>Praying for the victims of the Japan Tohoku earthquake<br><br>Makoto</div>
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