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Francis,<br>
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Some quick comments:<br>
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On 6/15/2010 5:04 PM, Francis Cave wrote:
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear members of WG 6<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I am finally able to attach a partial working
draft of
Amendment 1. I have got as far as the end of §14 (of ODF v1.1).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Those of you who are familiar with the
presentation of
Amendments to IS 29500 will see that I have adopted a similar approach,
using
formatting to indicate insertions and deletions.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In addition to needing to complete the draft
with the
changes in the remainder of the standard, I am aware of the following
significant issues with this draft:<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span><!--[endif]-->The Section numbers refer to ODF v1.1 and
not ODF v1.0.
This is because the documents with which I have been working are based
upon ODF
v1.1. I realise that these numbers will need to be changed to refer to
IS
26300:2006. This must be done before the draft is balloted.</p>
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Agreed.<br>
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</span></span><!--[endif]-->I have not included any page numbers, for
the same
reason. This also needs to be fixed before the draft is balloted.</p>
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Agreed.<br>
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</span></span><!--[endif]-->I have not included any Defect Report or
JIRA
references. Do we need to add these to the draft? They enable NBs to
determine
the source of each amendment, especially where it relates to a specific
DR
submitted by a member of SC 34. It may be that we don’t need them in
this
case, because it can be argued that all the amendments have the same
source:
the published text of ODF v1.1 which OASIS submitted to JTC 1/SC 34 as
a basis
for the Amendment. What do you think?</p>
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I have mixed feelings about this one. <br>
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On one hand I would prefer to avoid the work of referencing and
insertion of the Defect Reports/JIRA references but on the other hand,
I am sure that as a political issue, it could be helpful.<br>
<br>
Suggestion: Assuming we could maintain the coordination, why not have a
separate, explanatory document, that makes references to the Defect
Reports or JIRA references? Just as an "aid" to national bodies without
it adding content for discussion/debate to the amendment? <br>
<br>
Thinking that the amendment needs to be just that, the amendment. There
will be more than enough for discussion if we limit it to strictly what
is required for that document. <br>
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</span></span><!--[endif]-->The whole draft needs to be checked for
accuracy. I
would very much appreciate the assistance of the Working Group in
carrying out
this task.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Would it be helpful to ask for volunteers for particular sections? As
well as those of us who want to help review the entire draft? (Count me
as one of the latter.)<br>
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Thanks for all the hard work!<br>
<br>
Hope you are having a great day!<br>
<br>
Patrick<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This draft will form a major item for discussion
at our next
teleconference meeting, which is scheduled to take place on 2010-06-23,
i.e.
one week from now. I will circulate a meeting reminder and draft agenda
shortly. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Francis Cave<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Convenor<o:p></o:p></p>
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