PLEASE PROOF: Thursday's WG4 Minutes from the Paris Meeting, + the revised comment disposition status.

[Rex Jaeschke]

I agree. In Item 7 I'll change, 

"Members then spent considerable time formulating and discussing the
questions we need to address in order to make a plan going forward. Those
questions are as follows:"

To

"Members spent considerable time discussing possible ways to move our work
forward in the best possible way. 

To frame the discussion, a list of (knowingly provocative) questions was
made. The intent of the list was to jump-start the discussion and minimize
the possibility of omitting key issues.

These questions were:"



-----Original Message-----
From: Jesper Lund Stocholm [mailto:jesper.stocholm at ciber.dk] 
Sent: Friday, December 04, 2009 11:24 AM

Hello Rex,

Generally the minutes look just fine to me.

I do have a suggestion to the introduction to item 7 on the agenda:

I would suggest the paragraph before the list of questions be changed to:


"Members spent considerable time discussing possible ways to move our work
with ISO/IEC 29500 forward in the best possible way. 

To frame the discussion, a list of (provocative) questions was made. The
intent of the list was to jump-start the discussion and minimize the
possibility of missing key issues.

These questions were:"


(possible with any 'English' grammatical errors fixed by you)


My concern is that the current text could be conceived as a definitive list
providing a definitive answer.

Jesper Lund Stocholm
ciber Danmark A/S