PLEASE PROOF: Drafts of 29500-1/-4:2016; feedback due by the end of 2016-04-29

[Rex Jaeschke]

See my replies inline. Rex



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From: caroline arms [mailto:caroline.arms at gmail.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, April 12, 2016 6:54 AM
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Cc: SC 34 WG4 <e-SC34-WG4 at ecma-international.org>; TC45 <e-TC45 at ecma-international.org>
Subject: Re: PLEASE PROOF: Drafts of 29500-1/-4:2016; feedback due by the end of 2016-04-29

And continuing through the items in Cor 1:

Items 41-48 look OK

Item 49 is related to Item 1 in Cor 2, for which I noted an issue a few days ago.

Item 50 looks OK -- but there is no indicator of a change

Rex> I agree that is odd. During the final pass, I'll review this.



Items 51-52 look OK

Items 53-59 look OK wrt Cor 1. However, I see another problem in the displacedByCustomXml table entries in the Attributes tables in all these subclauses. We need to close up the attribute name and uppercase the "b" in
       w:displaced byCustomXml="next"
yielding
       w:displacedByCustomXml="next"

I leave others to determine whether this can be fixed as editorial or needs a DR.

Rex> It is clear to me these are errors made during editing, and that we can fix them here.


      Caroline