PLEASE PROOF: Drafts of 29500-1/-4:2016; feedback due by the end of 2016-04-29

[Rex Jaeschke]

See my replies inline. Rex



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From: caroline arms [mailto:caroline.arms at gmail.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, April 12, 2016 2:49 PM
To: Rex Jaeschke <rex at rexjaeschke.com>
Cc: SC 34 WG4 <e-SC34-WG4 at ecma-international.org>; TC45 <e-TC45 at ecma-international.org>
Subject: Re: PLEASE PROOF: Drafts of 29500-1/-4:2016; feedback due by the end of 2016-04-29

And a few more items from Cor 1 against Part 1 draft:

Item 60 looks OK   -- but I notice a typo in "attibute" in the
unchanged text here and quite frequently, including near the next few items.  Replacing "attibute" by "attribute"  looks like an editorial fix to deal with now.

Rex> I see them, and I'll fix them.




Items 61 and 62 look OK per se but also have 'w:displaced byCustomXml="next"' which should be 'w:displacedByCustomXml="next"'

Rex> I see them, and I'll fix them.




Item 63 is OK but has the "attibute" problem (at least twice)

Rex> Got it.


Item 64 is OK but has the 'w:displaced byCustomXml="next"' problem

Rex> Got it.


Item 65 looks OK

Item 66 was not implemented as in Cor 1 -- which added a reference in a new location.  The draft replaces a different (and still correct) reference with the new one.

Rex> I agree. The view element reference should be restored and the new reference added to print layout view, as shown in COR1.



Item 67 looks OK but needs a special track after accepting Track Changes wrt parentheses and  

Rex> I agree; something isn't quite right there.



Items 68-80 look OK.

Item 81 looks OK.  See also item 2 in Cor 2.

Item 82 looks OK.  But I also note a typo:  "justfied" needs an "i"
(last sentence in example).  [Note: I found other instances of "justfied"]

Rex> Agreed; I'll fix these.



Item 83 looks OK.  However I see another instance of "the Open Database Connectivity interface" which probably needs to be changed to ODBC.  In example at end of same subclause.

Rex> Agreed; I'll fix this.


  Caroline