Draft NWIP

MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given) eb2m-mrt at asahi-net.or.jp
Fri Dec 17 01:59:27 CET 2010


Rob,

Looks good to me.

Here are some minor comments.

- Part 0 is not allowed.  Use Part 1.
- I don't think that "basic requirements" is an appropriate title for this
   part, since it provides mechanisms.  How about "Kernel"?
- In the "Programme of work", mark "a multi-part International Standard consisting of ... 
parts ".

Cheers,
Makoto


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