PLEASE PROOF: Final Drafts of 29500-1:2015 and 29500-4:2015 Posted to the SC 34/WG4 Site for Proofing. Feedback due by 2015-07-10

[Rex Jaeschke]

See my responses inline below. Rex

 

 

From: eb2mmrt at gmail.com [mailto:eb2mmrt at gmail.com] On Behalf Of MURATA Makoto
Sent: Sunday, July 19, 2015 5:20 AM
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Subject: Re: PLEASE PROOF: Final Drafts of 29500-1:2015 and 29500-4:2015 Posted to the SC 34/WG4 Site for Proofing. Feedback due by 2015-07-10

 

#114

 

The indentation of the paragraph beginning with "For instance" is mistaken.

 

Rex> Agreed; fixed.

 

 

#121

 

The description of the attribute sqlType is incorrect.  The consolidated text lacks some

 

Rex> Agreed; fixed by restoring the text that was accidentally deleted.

 

 

#134

 

The last bullet begins with "The" but it is not the beginning of a

sentence.  Should it be in lower case?

 

Rex> Agreed; fixed.

 

 

I have finally finished checking the consolidated Part 1.  Now, I should 

begin with Part 4.

 

Regards,

Makoto

 

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