Revised document conformance text

[MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given)]

Chris,

Thank you for your hard work.  But I have a number of comments.
A modification to your draft is attached.

1) Deleted clauses 2.1, 2,2 and 2.3 of Part 1

Clause 2.3 (What ISO/IEC 29500 Specifies) is deleted.  I agree that
this subclause should not occur in Clause 2 (Conformance).  But its
content should probably be moved to either Introduction or Clasue 8
(Overview).  I see no problems in removing original Clauses 2.1 and
2.2.

2) Comments on Part 1 Document Conformance

First, I do not agree on the second bullet (A conforming document shall
be of conformance class "Office Open XML Strict", as specified in
§22.9.2.2.) .  Subclause 22.9.2.2 does not define the conformance
class "Office Open XML Strict" but merely defines a datatype for
announcing conformance classes.  I think that we can safely get rid of
this bullet, since document conformance defined in Part 1 is always
"strict".  Rather, the sentence before these bullets should be changed
as follows:

       A document shall be of conformance class Office Open XML
       Strict if the following holds

Second, "and further specified in §17, §18 and §19 respectively." in
the fourth bullet should rather become a part of the third bullet and
should not be restricted to these three clauses.

Third, I think a note for RELAX NG schema validity would help.

3) Comments on Part 4 Document Conformance

My comments on Part 1 Document Conformance also apply to Part 4
Document Conformance.  But I have two additional comments.

First, both Part 1 clauses defining OPC parts and Part4 clauses defining
OPC parts should be listed.

Second, we cannot mandate validity of the VML drawing part, since
its root element cannot be validated against XSD.


Cheers,
Makoto
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