Proposed changes for DR 15-0021

[MURATA Makoto]

Caroline,

Thank you for your comments.  As you wrote, this requires another DR.

UK has always argued that Part 1 must not reference Part 4.  Now,
Part 1 does not have a normative reference to Part 4.  It does not
even have Part 4 in the bibliography.

Nevertheless, Primer in Part 1 has transitional features.  Should we move
that part of the Primer to Part 4?  Or , should we introduce Part 4 in the
Bibliography?  I would like to have another DR and discuss in the Seattle
F2F.

For now, I would like to close this DR by introducing changes required
for dropping the complex type CT_HtmlPublishProperties.  To do so, I think
that
we need the schema changes in

https://app.assembla.com/spaces/IS29500/subversion/commits/334
https://app.assembla.com/spaces/IS29500/subversion/commits/335

and the attached change to L.3.1.4.1, Part 1

Regards,
Makoto

2016-10-29 20:51 GMT+09:00 caroline arms <caroline.arms at gmail.com>:

> Murata-san,
>
> I've been looking at the textual changes you suggest.  I agree with
> your textual deletions.
>
> Background: As far as I can see, the HTML Publishing Properties
> (htmlPubPr) element was moved to Part 4 (and dropped from Part 1).  So
> clearly it makes sens to drop its complexType.  I'll rely on others to
> check the schema changes.
>
> Reading the entire Primer subclause L.3.1.4.1 made me wonder whether
> more changes to the text are warranted, given that it refers to
> features in Part 4.  We do have other instances where discussion in
> the Primer refers to features now in Part 4.  See the last sentence in
> L.5.2, which is about VML.
>
> At the very least, the "must" in the first paragraph seems jarring.
> The paragraph now reads:
> "An implementation must have the ability to save (and publish) a
> presentation to a web-friendly format like HTML or MHTML. Various
> parameters are used to configure the application for saving such
> formats as well as to control what content gets generated.  The
> parameters that configure the application are the HTML Publish
> properties whereas the content properties are the Web Properties."
>
> What about the following:
>
> Change "must have" to "might provide"
> Change "parameters are used" to "parameters are available"
> Add reference to Part 4 in a sentence modeled after the last sentence in
> L.5.2.
> Move last sentence in existing paragraph to a new paragraph.
>
> The result would be:
> "An implementation might provide the ability to save (and publish) a
> presentation to a web-friendly format like HTML or MHTML. Various
> parameters are available to configure the application for saving such
> formats as well as to control what content gets generated.  These
> parameters are introduced here.  For details, see the section on
> PresentationML in Part 4.
>
> The parameters that configure the application are the HTML Publish
> properties whereas the content properties are the Web Properties."
>
> I realize that this suggestion may need a new DR.
>
> Also, the Primer implies that this element/complexType is in PML,
> rather than DML.  So the DR Title should possibly be changed.
>
> Hope this helps.
>
> Caroline
>
> On Sat, Oct 29, 2016 at 3:26 AM, MURATA Makoto <eb2m-mrt at asahi-net.or.jp>
> wrote:
> > Folks,
> >
> >
> > Here is my proposal.  I hope to close this DR in
> > the next teleconference.
> >
> > Schema changes
> >
> > https://app.assembla.com/spaces/IS29500/subversion/commits/334
> > https://app.assembla.com/spaces/IS29500/subversion/commits/335
> >
> > Changes to L.3.1.4.1, Part 1
> >
> > Remove the paragraph "Indirectly", schema fragments,
> > and the last paragraph of this subclause.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Makoto
>
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