Clause 188.8.131.52 (thoughts based on your online draft as of 1/23)
caroline.arms at gmail.com
Tue Jan 23 13:56:28 CET 2018
I see you have been breaking the examples into bullet points. One
awkwardness that I had noticed is still present -- in the first bullet of
the first relationship.
· The mode of the first relationship is Internal (default). Thus,
the base IRI ("pack://http%3c,,www.example.com,ex.opc/foo/test.xml") is the
pack IRI created from the IRI (http://www.example.com/ex.opc) of the
package and the part name "/foo/test.xml".
I would move the parenthesized base IRI to the end of the sentence as
, yielding "pack://http%3c,,www.example.com,ex.opc/foo/test.xml".
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